March 30, 2013

Front Porch 2 (revisited)

Original (top image)

Update (bottom image)

Acrylic on Panel - 9 x 12 inches - Click Here to Bid

I found this one lying about in the back hallway and though I liked it, something wasn't quite right. I thought I'd try to learn what it was by "fixing" it. The changes are subtle, but I think it works a bit better. Other may disagree. Give me ten minutes and I might disagree myself.

1 comment:

Marla said...

I think they both have merit, but here's what I like about the revision: overall more exciting colors; fewer foreground branches obscuring the house; that little bit of brightly lit lawn on the left. It has more of a feeling now, and the first version seemed to be just documenting.